Sunday, 27 December 2015

The Truth (chapter 2) - The Unlucky night


To read the previous chapters click on the titles below.

  1. Chapter 1: The strangers


Chapter 2 {the unlucky night}

Catherine was on her way to school. Kenny was not there and it was strange, She saw the guy whom she saw the other day. 

He was talking to some other men. His face was stiff and without expression as it had been that day. 
He looked at her, deep into her eyes. His dark blue eyes locked  hers. Catherine stopped. The strange person walked towards her and Catherine could not think of anything but run and she ran. 

She tripped over something and……..

“Aaargh….”  She woke up. She was breathing heavily and her palms were all sweaty. She looked around and got to her senses. 

It was a silent night except for the hooting of an owl nearby.  A cold breeze blew over her dark brown hair through the open window. She had one of those strange dreams, again.
She went to the kitchen and had a glass of water. Got back onto her bed, she pulled her covers. She felt relieved that her mom didn’t hear her or her mom would have been so tensed.

Catherine couldn’t sleep. She turned and turned and     somewhat near dawn, she slept. 
The next morning she went to school as usual, met up with Kenny and later Ashley just outside the school.

“Where are you going Ashley?”  Asked Cath  
“Oh, just want to help mom”.
“As an assistant counsellor?” asked Catherine
“Yeah Cath, I forgot”. Hey Sean!

He was one among the people she saw that day and the guy at her dream today. But today he had a pleasant smile which made Catherine more nervous.

“Cath, this is my cousin Sean, on my father’s side and Sean , this is Catherine my cousin, on my mother’s side”.
Sean held out his hand.

Reluctantly she shook it...
She wanted to ask him a question. Finally she took courage and asked

 “Didn’t I see you near Mrs. Percy’s house on Monday?”  
“No”.
“Okay”. She said still feeling a bit strange.
“And Cath, aren’t you having practice today?” asked  Kenny
“Yep, I had totally forgotten it. Thanks Kenny”.

As she turned, she felt that Ashley and Kenny were discussing something.
She shook her head and went to practice. After practice, walking home, she simply felt there is something going to be wrong. 

She went to the library and the librarian Lucy welcomed her warmly.
“Hey, Catherine not seen you for a while, go on pick a book”. 

She went to the nearest cupboard. There were many books that she had not read. She picked a book went to Lucy to register it. 

“Having strange dreams huh?” the cover of the book said “dreams causes, reasons and meanings”.

She reached home, feeling tired, went to bed early that night. She was having a sound sleep after a long time. 

 Woken up by certain sounds she walked towards the window.
It sounded as the bang of a gun.

She looked around, the noise was from Mrs. Tweet’s house she saw somebody standing there. It was only now, that she realized, the man was Sean.

She heard Mrs. Tweets scream and Sean! ... He killed her... and fled. By then Catherine felt that Sean had looked at her, his eyes cold and cruel, and Catherine collapsed.

(To be continued ...)

31 comments:

  1. Nice job Clare, keep writing, I am sure in future people will be reading ur books

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  2. Nice job Clare, keep writing, I am sure in future people will be reading ur books

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  3. Very Good !
    Narration is excellent ��Keep writing,
    All the best Clare ��

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    1. I DID NOT EXPECT SUCH A BEAUTIFUL WRITING FROM A CHILD AGED 11. BEST OF LUCK. KEEP WRITING.
      N.B.: I HAD POSTED A COMMENT TO THIS STORY EARLIER ALONG WITH A POEM OF MINE AS A GIFT TO YOU. BUT THE POEM WAS POSTED WRONGLY. I WILL SEND IT TO YOU, IF I GET YOUR MAIL I.D.

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    2. Thank you uncle :).
      my email: benustresaclare@gmail.com

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  5. Can't wait dear mol ...
    post the next ....
    like Cathe I lost my sleep......
    love you dear....

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  6. thank you for your encouragement aunty.The chapters are on it's way.

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  7. Dear Clare,
    Dad has sent me link to your blog. It is very impressive. I will read your creations one by one and comment in this column.
    Love,
    Hari Uncle

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    1. thank you uncle. please do make necessary corrections

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  8. Nice interesting one..will read the other creations too. Keep it up. Your dad posted the link to me.
    Hema

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  9. Nice interesting one..will read the other creations too. Keep it up. Your dad posted the link to me.
    Hema

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  10. Good to read. Go on, you have readers this end.

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  11. Congratulations dear Clare Jose. It is certainly an interesting mystery. Loved reading it. Keep going. You are indeed a gifted junior. Keep reading; keep writing. All the best.

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  12. Good going... All the very Best for the next part... Congrats Molu..

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